Version: Update (5/19/2017) [same as previous]
Bugs:
Choosing 'No' to 'Play Cutscene?' after the Chapter 9 title immediately loops back to the chapter 9 title. Save file:
puu.sh/vW3sX/f22180b76b.rvdata2I just realized that the music from Koru's throne room keeps playing through this peaceful letter-writing scene:
i.imgur.com/uZTE6z5.pngI had trouble figuring out where to go after talking to Dante. A hint where someone mentions the new gang being to the north would be enough.
This fight uses the conversation / hub music, not the battle music:
i.imgur.com/wfMhELZ.pngSo does this one:
i.imgur.com/p9KIan0.pngHow much HRT?
i.imgur.com/Mt0vwNe.pngYou can walk through this wall at some points. I think I even managed to glitch my way through to the chapter end...:
i.imgur.com/V96zqEx.png [ It's probably the same as the battle map, shown here:
i.imgur.com/uyeoOLp.png ]
I don't have a screenshot, but I'm pretty sure the suicide bomber Zealot during the cutscene runs away from, not towards, Arthur and Hermina...
Because of not being able to see Hermina on the map, I managed to stumble through the back wall of the church, triggered a scene, and hit the chapter *8* end event somehow, looping back to the start of chapter 9?
Interesting note: The way in which the game swaps your gear at the start of Chapter 9 can do some strange things. I previously had Hermina in Dark Impress cosplay. At the start of Chapter 9, she got swapped into her casual clothes, and her equipped weapon (a spear) got unequipped, since she no longer had the demon wings equipped... but she didn't get a replacement weapon, and it didn't actually take the demon wings out of my inventory. This fight is pretty easy if you can fly. Hermina looks cool standing on a roof like that though.
i.imgur.com/BSbLUlN.pngStopping the thieves in time, on the other hand, is actually nearly impossible even if you can fly (I managed it maybe one time in four).
Typos:
i.imgur.com/R9tuKnk.png"who the Rage gang?": "who the Rage gang are?" (or, "about the Rage gang?")
i.imgur.com/71UwYBx.pnghas: has had
i.imgur.com/OwJ78az.pngwere waring: were waging
full fledge: fully-fledged?
i.imgur.com/bWNyljL.pngsweaten: sweaten
[Also: Hexcalibur? SOLD!]
i.imgur.com/fGjmx7S.pngwierd: weird
i.imgur.com/0XyQLGx.pngthree long years of search have: three long years of searching have (or, 'three year long search has')
i.imgur.com/aSuUPrA.pnghere: hear
i.imgur.com/ajdfciK.pngI've never met before: I've never met him before (or, "we've never met before")
i.imgur.com/jmZL89e.pngeaching being: each being
i.imgur.com/kpDdQ3N.pnglife source: life force [?]
(The last sentence ends weirdly: maybe "the only way to stave off their death is to kill" rather than "the only way to stave off their death, they must kill"?)
i.imgur.com/z80CnFI.pngor than: than face
i.imgur.com/GUHzrnK.pngkil: kill
i.imgur.com/er4tqU1.pngyour: you're
i.imgur.com/ZVUuWWN.pngwished I: wish I
(It sounds from context like Arthur is saying Hermina actually is better than... well, whoever, but "No, you're not" here is easily interpreted as "No, you're not [better than her]". "Yes, you are [better than her]" actually strikes me as more helpful (As an alternative, "That's not true" is much less ambiguous). Alternatively, keep Arthur's line the same, but change Hermina's to "just as bad as her".)
i.imgur.com/lvouBzs.pngHermina's shouting wraps into a new text box a few times, which would be okay but it loses the increased font size.
i.imgur.com/qYd7RdB.pngYour compassion: Your compassion makes you
i.imgur.com/TyrDI76.pngmeet her, I beat: meet her, I'll beat [?]
Uh, I missed a screenshot of it, but during the thief battle, "I need to loose them" should be "lose them".
i.imgur.com/neTupOt.pngsupremists: supremacists
i.imgur.com/5OE9tYz.pngpursue that to which you aren't worthy: pursue that which you aren't worthy of
i.imgur.com/wKhkqOL.pngwould rather not if I can: would rather not if I can avoid it
i.imgur.com/H80uRza.png"!" should be a "?!"
i.imgur.com/T19ft5h.pngcan't: can (unless that was actually supposed to be a slip of the tongue or something)
i.imgur.com/sHj8jb2.png"No your not": Same ambiguity problem as last time. Could you change this to "That's not true!"?
i.imgur.com/QEuU3Ko.pngdare interrupts: dares interrupt
i.imgur.com/Y2QA3dv.pngyou are: you are a
i.imgur.com/S18VvNG.pnghas made crazy: has made you crazy
that's no right: that's no reason (or "that doesn't give you the right")
i.imgur.com/psavSJv.pngyour to: your soul to
you're soul: your soul
i.imgur.com/KI81JbP.png"speaking to telepathically": remove the 'to' (and maybe the comma after 'here')
i.imgur.com/Voehec4.pngmay got: may have got
(maybe: "that means": "that just means")
i.imgur.com/V0OYKr6.pngand dragging: and drag
i.imgur.com/wPRIyl7.pngthat: than
i.imgur.com/pq59N5u.pngwe'll working together: we'll be working together (or, "we'll work together")
i.imgur.com/FM2QObj.pngEither remove the "as" from the start, or replace "that" with a comma, so either:
"As you may recall in my last letter, I painted Ms. Hermina in a rather negative light."
"You may recall in my last letter that I painted Ms. Hermina in a rather negative light." (I might've moved "that" to just after "recall" but this is closer to the original)
i.imgur.com/bZ0xkr5.pngto be valuable ally: to be a valuable ally
i.imgur.com/4KQMoA2.pngnot but a mere fantasy: replace "not" with either "nothing" or "naught"
i.imgur.com/Y7XDsFB.png"When I command to do something, I expect you to do something!": "When I command you to do something, I expect you to do it!"?
i.imgur.com/LeL2F2V.pngshalln't: shan't (looks wrong, but is the antiquated contraction of shall not)
I don't think that "o" should have an apostrophe. "o'" is a (stereotypically Gaelic) contraction of "of", whereas "O" how you open a declaration like that (similar to ending a Japanese sentence with よ [yo]).
i.imgur.com/3J691JB.pngneccessity: necessity
i.imgur.com/P4jRIsI.pngfreakining: freaking