Yay, the snowy grass is fixed. I have now finished the chapter.
(Side note, thank you for fixing the crackling too; that was getting really annoying.
)
i.imgur.com/rwwDpZf.pngAika, even if she does, I don't think that's going to help this situation.
(And Bianca had the exact same thought! Amazing.)
I am going to miss having Betty for these fights. Whipped into Shape is an incredible skill. +25% (I think) WPN/ARM/HTR/LOV, +40% evasion rate, +2 MOV?! Crazy.
This would be a really great place to hide a treasure chest.
i.imgur.com/yOCyhv0.png"Big Sister" was... really easy, for a chapter boss. Low stats, weak minions, not very many minions... That was
deliberate, wasn't it? The last two bosses were the admiral of an alien fleet and a dark knight; "Big Sister" is just a girl, she's already terrified of Mei, and all her real allies are already defeated, so...
i.imgur.com/TJe8eNX.pngI don't know when the school year ends, but for humorous purposes I'm going to assume it's December 31st and she's desperately hoping they go another six days without any life-threatening drama or tragedy. Poor Shizuka; Alice is still out there.
i.imgur.com/XHijfRl.pngThat outfit is kinda cute.
i.imgur.com/ccMMyOv.pngHow, um, caring?
Wait, who
was that in the last scene? Was it "Little Sister" (didn't look right to me...) or
Aika's missing big sister? I thought both of her parents had brown hair...? It's been a while though...
Bugs:
If you go south and fight the yuki musume and bearbarians outside the circus tent, the summon limit is one lower than your actual number of characters (I assume it wasn't increased by the addition of Betty to the party). If you go north and fight Little Sister, though, it's actually correctly increased to 9.
This is probably a RPG Maker quirk, but: Something strange is happening with Price of Power. When
Hermina uses it on
Aika, Aika takes 100 damage. But it only does 75 to
Shizuka. (It doesn't do any extra damage to people who have the Blood Stone equipped, so they take 1/8 damage instead of 1/2, but even so it should be doing more than that; maybe even BDY boosters don't increase the damage you take from it, but Betty does like 800 damage to Shizuka with Whipped into Shape and only 20 or so to Aika...)
If you leave the tent to the south and fight the yuki musume, you get stuck on a black screen after the fight.
i.imgur.com/Jxp8V0l.png"Little Sister" has the wrong items equipped.
i.imgur.com/kVpfkse.pngI thought this was Betty's title?
i.imgur.com/OioWVWr.pngShizuka is facing the wrong direction, because she's the player and the door I walked through was on the north wall.
i.imgur.com/HLoBq3R.pngTypos:
i.imgur.com/91GDlvi.pngoutside of of: outside of
i.imgur.com/rStgWnc.pnga traitor our: a traitor in our
i.imgur.com/mRt9JzS.pngShe can't THAT: She can't be THAT
i.imgur.com/WGmV20B.pngrelated her: related to her
i.imgur.com/LbS1qt7.pngthat will praise for: that will praise me for
i.imgur.com/0E15uj6.png"who won't our parents will" "who our parents won't"
i.imgur.com/pWTfaSG.pngThe previous line gets sliced up between two pages and loses the formatting on the second one.
i.imgur.com/KF90jVc.pngseem to awefully think alike: seem to think awfully alike
i.imgur.com/cxwNzE9.pngI think that first "isn't" should be a "wasn't", to match the "was supposed to"?
i.imgur.com/wbK2Zun.png"If you weren't you'd either would have": "If you weren't, you'd either have" or "If you weren't, you either would have
"you'd should": "you'd have showed"
i.imgur.com/r4grUSJ.pngone us: one of us
(It's almost like she's seen this trick before or something...
)
i.imgur.com/YTk5b3s.png"I push": "I want to punch"?
i.imgur.com/6PJvIEL.pngmake: made
i.imgur.com/E3IJ3Q6.pnghabbits: habits
i.imgur.com/RRKkTFf.pngI think there should be a "has" instead of "had" on the line before this one.
i.imgur.com/TwTUW68.pngholier-than-hero: holier-than-thou
i.imgur.com/xHp5usy.pngI rather: I'd rather
i.imgur.com/1QWVfVc.pngmake feel: make you feel
i.imgur.com/RUoastZ.pngComma after "Big Sis", I think.
i.imgur.com/2jaeay0.pngTime face: Time to face
i.imgur.com/k9fNaCW.pngMissing close quote after "personalities".
i.imgur.com/1Hp5hmd.pngthe ones: the one
her: them (if she means the children and not her sister)
still my hands: still on my hands
i.imgur.com/3EYang5.pngLine before has a typo and I can't remember what it is!
i.imgur.com/E6oBsCc.pngAdd "the" before "Witches' Council".
inprison: imprison
i.imgur.com/UjlGAzI.pngGoodbye can be combined into one word, if you like...
And you still need the close quote even if she gets cut off.
i.imgur.com/4iDZhAD.pngyou'll saving: you'll be saving
you can save you: you can save
i.imgur.com/aqhR9GC.pnggood care you: good care of you
(I was half expecting Yong to redeem herself by disarming or even stabbing "Little Sister"...)
i.imgur.com/7tj8QdV.pngThe tense in this one is a bit weird. I'll type the thing out in full so I can make comparisons.
Now: "We don't know when or where we will meet them again, but we were certain that one day, we will and when we do, we won't let them escape again!"
Present tense looking forward: "We don't know when or where we will meet them again, but we are certain that one day, we will and when we do, we won't let them escape again!"
Past tense looking forward: "We didn't know when or where we would meet them again, but we were certain that one day, we would and when we did, we wouldn't let them escape again!"
(there are other options but those seem like the best options)
i.imgur.com/KM6pvew.png"we were ofcourse were": "we were of course" or "we of course were"
that headmistress: that the headmistress
i.imgur.com/V1ECH5B.png"no matter": "no amount"
i.imgur.com/P78Dgfh.pngI suggest changing the start of this line to either:
"Our punishment - which we all accepted without complaint - was" (which I recommend), or
"Our punishment, which we all accepted without complaint, was"
i.imgur.com/Xx02wee.pngthat consumed lives: that (had) consumed our lives
i.imgur.com/ZmROGGt.pngThis is kinda easy to misinterpret as "have to deal with more trouble
than we do"... but I'm not really sure how to fix it. I guess it's fine.
That last "them" is pretty ambiguous, as well... kinda sounds like she's talking about the protagonists.
i.imgur.com/IVOv0xo.png95% sure that's not how her name is spelled...
i.imgur.com/9pdopsM.pngrumble: rubble