Post by Crowthorne on Jul 25, 2017 17:05:37 GMT
Version: Update (7/24/2017) (Chapter 10 update)
I haven't actually gotten into any fights yet (I wanted to walk around and talk to absolutely everyone first), but I also haven't encountered any really significant new bugs. So that's cool.
I'll post again when I've finished the chapter, or if a bug causes me to get stuck.
Bugs:
There is still an invisible-player glitch at some point during the end of chapter 8 that carries over into Chapter 9 (I suspect it's in the part before the episode title; earlier, it's fine, but the Koru cutscene right after looks weird with an invisible Hermina. I can get you a save file if you want?), and I can't find a way to get around it by skipping or not skipping cutscenes.
Arthur's Protection can only target himself?
i.imgur.com/8TkhJ4K.png
Should this scene still have the same music as the ones before and after?
i.imgur.com/4mZ6drP.png
You can walk into the door Hermina leaves through during the Chapter 10 opening. It doesn't actually work, though, until you leave the room and return; you just disappear when you get fully onto its space.
i.imgur.com/BxJzflZ.png
Obligatory "I can use character X's abilities in the hub!" report... this time for Hikaru.
i.imgur.com/ARUjWQ0.png
You can run up the highlighted area and get onto the wall.
i.imgur.com/pbVbM5d.png
After collecting Arthur and Hermina, there's a solid invisible object left where Arthur was, on the highlighted tile. You can even talk to Arthur: i.imgur.com/dBQYLzu.png
Given that only Hermina joins, not Arthur, is this actually intentional, and the bug that Arthur goes invisible?
i.imgur.com/DcYE9Qo.png
It is possible to go to Hell School 2F without having even gone to the Audiotorum.
Typos:
i.imgur.com/OIOyRLv.png
you precious: your precious
i.imgur.com/RD7ZfXJ.png
out of my: out of my mouth
you even have been: you have even been
i.imgur.com/pekWEmC.png
the least I could do humor: the least I could do was humor
i.imgur.com/R3EuDDJ.png
we'll need to get the permission of student council: we'll need to get permission from the student council (or at least add "the" before "student council")
i.imgur.com/cFHTuq4.png
Any one else any: Anyone else have any
i.imgur.com/SlptEGG.png
I suggest replacing that "at" with "her".
i.imgur.com/8jvrHTM.png
I think maybe "shall I" needs to be "I shall" here, unless you add "Only" before "Then".
i.imgur.com/h6Bpjpf.png
too: to
(Side note: I can see Hermina behind that text box.)
i.imgur.com/ugXWAgi.png
I don't what: I don't know what
i.imgur.com/XzlmvNl.png
how about we what: how about we [go see? go look? check?] what
Also, add a comma after "over".
i.imgur.com/XTvBOCI.png
This entire line should be "When does the play start? We can get good seats.", I think. Maybe "can" should be "could"?
i.imgur.com/M3BE030.png
looking forward today's: looking forward to today's
i.imgur.com/vBo59rV.png
We'll sure: We'll make sure
i.imgur.com/8KGUdy1.png
festival going: festival is going
i.imgur.com/Ln3Qed5.png
bets how long: bets on how long
(and where you have "take", "last" would probably be more accurate)
i.imgur.com/jntucsy.png
disasterously: disastrously (this is one of those spellings that always used to trip me up)
i.imgur.com/MJIWReM.png
That second "wouldn't" should just be a "would", or it's a double negative.
i.imgur.com/tqn5X3m.png
writes homes: writes home
i.imgur.com/CZTFgiI.png
The wrapping bugged out; needs a manually added line break
i.imgur.com/daGPVSX.png
make: makes
i.imgur.com/i7MpXpN.png
Can: Could (in this context)
i.imgur.com/wawzuT1.png
"share's my wives habbit with": should be "shares my wife's habit of"
i.imgur.com/Zy6ZU9h.png
There's a couple of missing words here and I think you spelled Kamiko with an I earlier but it's spelled here as Kameko. Which is it?
I think this should be something like "It wouldn't do for the daughter of an old schoolmate to be heartbroken because of my own daughter's conquest."
Even then, the way it's phrased sorta implies Kameko [sic] is Ringo's mentioned daughter... Basically this line is a mess.
i.imgur.com/sibz416.png
sews: sows (it's pronounced pretty much the same, and it's an old word meaning to plant [seeds], in case you wondered)
i.imgur.com/LopXGPw.png
Missing capital A in Alice in the longer description of Alice's Ribbon.
i.imgur.com/gqa1IsJ.png
that seen: that's seen
i.imgur.com/eT4C9Sc.png
Heart Brocken: Heartbroken
i.imgur.com/qx4OO0t.png
die try: dying trying
i.imgur.com/U18Q1F6.png
fawning Augustus: fawning over Augustus
i.imgur.com/p6uNln9.png
boy's: boys
i.imgur.com/raPvsyh.png
like see: like to see
i.imgur.com/xu0n96K.png
Daina: Diana
i.imgur.com/pvqOlDw.png
I'm come: I'll come
Notes:
i.imgur.com/ugXWAgi.png
Honorifics! Did you change your mind or was that one a special case / accident?
i.imgur.com/tbsBRSs.png
Audiotorium is a play on words, and not a typo'd form of auditorium, right?
i.imgur.com/eJ0jtqN.png
Might this be better as two lines?...
Does the game ever actually tell you to go find Arthur and Hermina, or even Hikaru and Katsumi, before the play, rather than just taking Ringo? If not, is that by design?
I haven't actually gotten into any fights yet (I wanted to walk around and talk to absolutely everyone first), but I also haven't encountered any really significant new bugs. So that's cool.
I'll post again when I've finished the chapter, or if a bug causes me to get stuck.
Bugs:
There is still an invisible-player glitch at some point during the end of chapter 8 that carries over into Chapter 9 (I suspect it's in the part before the episode title; earlier, it's fine, but the Koru cutscene right after looks weird with an invisible Hermina. I can get you a save file if you want?), and I can't find a way to get around it by skipping or not skipping cutscenes.
Arthur's Protection can only target himself?
i.imgur.com/8TkhJ4K.png
Should this scene still have the same music as the ones before and after?
i.imgur.com/4mZ6drP.png
You can walk into the door Hermina leaves through during the Chapter 10 opening. It doesn't actually work, though, until you leave the room and return; you just disappear when you get fully onto its space.
i.imgur.com/BxJzflZ.png
Obligatory "I can use character X's abilities in the hub!" report... this time for Hikaru.
i.imgur.com/ARUjWQ0.png
You can run up the highlighted area and get onto the wall.
i.imgur.com/pbVbM5d.png
After collecting Arthur and Hermina, there's a solid invisible object left where Arthur was, on the highlighted tile. You can even talk to Arthur: i.imgur.com/dBQYLzu.png
Given that only Hermina joins, not Arthur, is this actually intentional, and the bug that Arthur goes invisible?
i.imgur.com/DcYE9Qo.png
It is possible to go to Hell School 2F without having even gone to the Audiotorum.
Typos:
i.imgur.com/OIOyRLv.png
you precious: your precious
i.imgur.com/RD7ZfXJ.png
out of my: out of my mouth
you even have been: you have even been
i.imgur.com/pekWEmC.png
the least I could do humor: the least I could do was humor
i.imgur.com/R3EuDDJ.png
we'll need to get the permission of student council: we'll need to get permission from the student council (or at least add "the" before "student council")
i.imgur.com/cFHTuq4.png
Any one else any: Anyone else have any
i.imgur.com/SlptEGG.png
I suggest replacing that "at" with "her".
i.imgur.com/8jvrHTM.png
I think maybe "shall I" needs to be "I shall" here, unless you add "Only" before "Then".
i.imgur.com/h6Bpjpf.png
too: to
(Side note: I can see Hermina behind that text box.)
i.imgur.com/ugXWAgi.png
I don't what: I don't know what
i.imgur.com/XzlmvNl.png
how about we what: how about we [go see? go look? check?] what
Also, add a comma after "over".
i.imgur.com/XTvBOCI.png
This entire line should be "When does the play start? We can get good seats.", I think. Maybe "can" should be "could"?
i.imgur.com/M3BE030.png
looking forward today's: looking forward to today's
i.imgur.com/vBo59rV.png
We'll sure: We'll make sure
i.imgur.com/8KGUdy1.png
festival going: festival is going
i.imgur.com/Ln3Qed5.png
bets how long: bets on how long
(and where you have "take", "last" would probably be more accurate)
i.imgur.com/jntucsy.png
disasterously: disastrously (this is one of those spellings that always used to trip me up)
i.imgur.com/MJIWReM.png
That second "wouldn't" should just be a "would", or it's a double negative.
i.imgur.com/tqn5X3m.png
writes homes: writes home
i.imgur.com/CZTFgiI.png
The wrapping bugged out; needs a manually added line break
i.imgur.com/daGPVSX.png
make: makes
i.imgur.com/i7MpXpN.png
Can: Could (in this context)
i.imgur.com/wawzuT1.png
"share's my wives habbit with": should be "shares my wife's habit of"
i.imgur.com/Zy6ZU9h.png
There's a couple of missing words here and I think you spelled Kamiko with an I earlier but it's spelled here as Kameko. Which is it?
I think this should be something like "It wouldn't do for the daughter of an old schoolmate to be heartbroken because of my own daughter's conquest."
Even then, the way it's phrased sorta implies Kameko [sic] is Ringo's mentioned daughter... Basically this line is a mess.
i.imgur.com/sibz416.png
sews: sows (it's pronounced pretty much the same, and it's an old word meaning to plant [seeds], in case you wondered)
i.imgur.com/LopXGPw.png
Missing capital A in Alice in the longer description of Alice's Ribbon.
i.imgur.com/gqa1IsJ.png
that seen: that's seen
i.imgur.com/eT4C9Sc.png
Heart Brocken: Heartbroken
i.imgur.com/qx4OO0t.png
die try: dying trying
i.imgur.com/U18Q1F6.png
fawning Augustus: fawning over Augustus
i.imgur.com/p6uNln9.png
boy's: boys
i.imgur.com/raPvsyh.png
like see: like to see
i.imgur.com/xu0n96K.png
Daina: Diana
i.imgur.com/pvqOlDw.png
I'm come: I'll come
Notes:
i.imgur.com/ugXWAgi.png
Honorifics! Did you change your mind or was that one a special case / accident?
i.imgur.com/tbsBRSs.png
Audiotorium is a play on words, and not a typo'd form of auditorium, right?
i.imgur.com/eJ0jtqN.png
Might this be better as two lines?...
Does the game ever actually tell you to go find Arthur and Hermina, or even Hikaru and Katsumi, before the play, rather than just taking Ringo? If not, is that by design?