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Post by Elkat on Nov 1, 2017 3:37:52 GMT
Happy Halloween!
I will start working on chapter 14 as soon as tomorrow (if all goes well). I will work on any and all typos bugs and typos that occur from this chapter whenever I can, but unless they are crippling to game play/story advancement, they will uploaded with chapter 14 update.
Woops! I forgot the transparency bug with the sky dock. Fixing that pronto!
Should be fixed now.
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Crowthorne
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Post by Crowthorne on Dec 21, 2017 13:33:22 GMT
I thought this (Amara and Bianca's focus chapter) was a pretty good chapter. The enemy variety wasn't THAT great (I'm pretty sure my Electrat kill count was nearing 60 by the end of the chapter, and if I was struggling, a lightning resistance item would have been a really powerful addition to my equipment), but:
- The puzzle was well-designed, if you can call it a puzzle. I felt smart for figuring it out, but I guess it was as much a way to show more of the backstory as a puzzle for its own sake.
- The boss was actually pretty challenging (not on the level of Kamiko, thankfully, but definitely a legitimate threat... until she ran out of MND, anyhow) with decently powerful spells and a lot of health to get through.
- The ending took me off-guard; I was expecting that subplot to last longer. I found it genuinely emotional and found most of the characters understandable by the end, even the villain*, so I suppose you did well.
* To some extent. I'm not sure how exactly she managed to transfer all the blame for her own hurt onto other people than the ones responsible, but just wanting the pain and heartbreak to end is something I can relate to, if not by experience.
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