Chapter 10 Discussion

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Chapter 10 Discussion Jul 24, 2017 18:43:06 GMT

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Post by Elkat on Jul 24, 2017 18:43:06 GMT

Sorry this chapter took so long to make. It was a real pain in the ass. I've learned my lesson. No more increasing the party by 4 or more characters for a single chapter! Now I'm going to take a breather and plan out chapters 11-14 while I wait for the bug report to come in. Heads up: Chapters 11-14 are special "promotion" chapters for Aika, Shizuka, Huan and Mei. Similar to chapters 6-9, they will be focused on the relationships of a single couple, but be more focused on growing a single character in them. Bianca, Amara, Arthur and Haun's will have their promotion chapters 16-19. What's chapter 15? Well, let's just another holiday event is on its way. (And if I stay on schedule I might actually be able release that chapter in time for that actual holiday.)

Crowthorne Full Member It's still me, I just changed my avatar! Posts: 115	Chapter 10 Discussion Jul 25, 2017 10:13:13 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Crowthorne on Jul 25, 2017 10:13:13 GMT I can't find the download link on the itch.io page. Am I being super dumb?
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Elkat Administrator Posts: 69	Chapter 10 Discussion Jul 25, 2017 15:10:13 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elkat on Jul 25, 2017 15:10:13 GMT Nah, it seems somehow the download was set to hidden. -_-' I've fixed it.

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Chapter 10 Discussion Jul 25, 2017 15:30:19 GMT

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Post by Crowthorne on Jul 25, 2017 15:30:19 GMT

Jul 25, 2017 15:10:13 GMT Elkat said:

Nah, it seems somehow the download was set to hidden. -_-' I've fixed it.

Awesome, thanks. Currently trying to find a save file that lets me get to the end of chapter 9 without the invisible player glitch.

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Chapter 10 Discussion Jul 26, 2017 7:13:28 GMT

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Post by Crowthorne on Jul 26, 2017 7:13:28 GMT

Goodness, there is a lot to talk about in this chapter. I am not even finished yet (haven't done hell school 2F) but I'm going to go ahead and post now...

Yeah, holy crap, I can see why that took longer than the last few chapters.

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That sounds irresponsible and dangerous, so there's probably a club for it.

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Everyone else: "Wait, you're not?"

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I am disappointed Papa Kurobara was present because I bet Shizuka's reaction would have been funny.

Wait, did Hikaru attend St. Sayuri? Is he a warlock like it was initially implied Arthur was?

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Hikaru I could understand, but I'm surprised Ringo's stats and level are so low, given her implied profession. I guess she's holding back and concealing her strength?
Edit: Or just out of practice?

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Seeing this gave me a good laugh.

Already starting to wish for an elevator from 1F up to the classrooms and back. Or a teleporter. I guess it would let you skip talking to some people, though, which would be a problem...

Learning Arthur's dad's name actually made me laugh out loud. He just couldn't resist, huh?

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Did literally EVERYONE's parents attend St. Sayuri?

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Okay, you got me. I actually laughed out loud, again. Well done.

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Next time, on Witches' Wrestling Entertainment...

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That plus his special is a cool combo. I like that. I dunno how well it works in actual combat, since nothing in this chapter lives long enough to try it.

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...A literal giantess? Wait, is Haun half dwarf? This would explain so much.

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The really weird thing is that none of you knew each other before this... although I guess you do live all around the globe.

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My god, he's a harem protagonist.

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He evidently did a pretty terrible job, considering I'm pretty sure Miyuki could claim the same.

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...said every hero ever, before they had a chance to level up.

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I knew it was going to be Bianca's yaoi doujinshi!

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Can I just say that I love that you didn't show the discussion that led up to this scene? The scene itself is much funnier.

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Mon dieu. We finally know where Bianca gets it from.

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Tee hee. You said "little".

I was honestly hoping that would lead to the first actual battle of the episode somehow.

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Wow, she nailed it.

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Well done. You made me laugh out loud at 5:30 AM and probably wake up the entire house.

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Hermina hopes not.

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Somehow this sounds really familiar... and I have no idea from where.

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That moniker makes the school play's script at least 50% weirder.

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Hahaha. Wait, but who's the evil overlord? Hans? Is it just a fantasy cliché?

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Jeez, this fight was sheer pandemonium. I am so glad spells like Thunder Roulette don't friendly fire.

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Hahahaha. Nice.

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The job board's list is so long now that it's actually silly. It's possible to navigate it, still, but... can we get subcategories, maybe? Or a symbol after ones that are ready to be handed in?

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Yeah, this amount of allies is frankly getting a little silly. I'm pretty sure I could win this fight with a random quarter of these people.

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Oh lord, it actually happened.

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...I have no words. He basically nailed it.

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Guys, you are blocking almost the entire hallway.

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Haven't you ever seen a girl level grinding before? Or doing postgame content?

^{(The postgame of every Nippon Ichi strategy RPG is mostly summoning demons just to kill them.)}

Hoooly crap. I just got the new attack spells from being level 40 on most of the party (Haun, Bianca, and the parents are lagging). Those are crazy powerful. Aika's is my favorite so far for name and added functionality.
...Huh. And apparently my Hermina was missing her grimoire skills.

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Chapter 10 Discussion Jul 29, 2017 6:27:48 GMT

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Post by Crowthorne on Jul 29, 2017 6:27:48 GMT

I just finished Hell School 2F, which I was expecting to be the last map and not the second half of the chapter. No wonder it took a while to make.

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Ahahahaha. Ha. Ha. Ha.
She was sandbagging so much if that's even remotely true.
Guess I could imagine it though.

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> level 4000
(Actual prediction: Level 85-100)

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Seriously, Aika?! You haven't been talking to Alice, have you?
...Or, wait, was that sarcasm? Gaah! I guess, with the "very"...

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...and since it clearly didn't work, you're now trying to use it for the opposite! At least she learns.

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That internal reaction of "what did I just say" was perfect.
Is there a way you can highlight the 'am'? Italicize it or something?

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Phrasing!
I dunno if the tree costume ruins the effect or dramatically improves it. I think it's growing on me. As much as it can while still looking like a placeholder graphic.

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This costume is definitely an improvement and he's never going to be taking it off from now on.

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This outfit for Shizuka when?!
Oh, wait. Probably next chapter.
Hooray! I love miko outfits.

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Shizuka is probably the only character in this game who would use "-sama" when referring to Ai.

...Well, Kamiko might use "kisama"... but that means "you [implied: absolute bastard]".

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♫Plausible deniability...♫

The Shiroyuri interlude was almost perfect, grammatically, and really gave me a glimpse of how much more I could be enjoying this if I wasn't busy picking it apart. It was actually really cool, and quite motivating.

Last Edit: Jul 29, 2017 6:32:58 GMT by Crowthorne

Zenryoku zenkai!

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